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Dream on the other side of mirror

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I've been making this one for about a... month? Yeah, long, I know xD. But I really like it ^u^. And I learnt something new~. I can shade metal now XDDD
(And I don't know who's this girl xD)

Robiłam ten obrazek przez około... miesiąc? Tak, długo, wiem xD. Ale na serio mi się podoba ^u^. I nauczyłam się czegoś nowego~. Mogę już cieniować metal xDDD
(I - nie, nie wiem, kim jest ta dziewczyna xD)


And, please, if you can write a critique - write it, I'll be grateful for every help :heart:
I, proszę, jeśli możesz, napisz krytykę - będę wdzięczna za każdą pomoc :heart:


Would anybody be interested in print? o:
Czy byłby ktoś zainteresowany wydrukiem? o:


Reference is by :iconsenshistock: [link]. I saw it and immediately I had an idea for a drawing <3.

The artwork belongs to me, don't use it without permision, ok?~ c:

I had some problems with getting her back right (even with a reference.. I'm really hopeless xD) and *Never-love-me & *Suesanne helped me to see what was wrong with them c:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

This is my first attempt at a critique so please bear with me<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/>
Overall this is drawn and colored well. The clothing and folds could use a little work, however. Maybe darker creases and more fluid looking folds? They look a little tightly drawn. Also if you wanted, you could have added more shading to the face, and a bit more blended. Then there's minor anatomy mistakes. For example, the toes are pointing upwards, making it look unnatural. The coloring on the frame, though, is very well done, it looks beautiful and professionally done. You can clearly tell you put hard work and effort into this, also time. Overall, very well done!